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ASSESSMENT 2 COMM1068
PARAGRAPH 1: NARRATIVE
FIRST DRAFT
Please cut and paste your BLOG from the week 1 discussion board below:
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Many are of the idea that getting into a college means that you will inevitably do well in your
life and gradually make a name for yourself in the society you live in. However UniSA serves as a
reminder in these times, telling me that there are countless people struggling, hurrying, tumbling
with their arms outstretched towards success and to make it out of here as a victor, I need to run
faster and smarter. I am (ENTER NAME) and I am currently pursing (….).
I am from a very normal family which hammered into me the importance college has in
one’s life and I being someone willing to throw myself at opportunities and change, opted for the life
here at UniSA, hoping that this is my golden ticket for a life that will not be lost amongst the crowd.
Success, I have learned is not something that can be compromised upon, it comes before everything.
I have an interest in taking up content creation as my career based on my knowledge and my
skills given how sought after and interesting, jobs in those sectors are. After completing college, all
the while networking and gaining profitable experience through various network this institution
throws open for me, I wish to have gain years of experience in content creation and then work as a
freelancer.
NAME: STUDENT USER NAME:

ASSESSMENT 2 COMM1068
PARAGRAPH 1 – NARRATIVE
FINAL DRAFT
Please type your EDITED and PROOFED BLOGposting below.
Word count:
It is a general belief that getting into a college means that a person will inevitably excel in his
life and gradually make a name for himself in the society he lives in. However UniSA serves as a
realist in these times, reminding me that there are countless people struggling, hurrying, tumbling
with their arms outstretched towards success.To make it out of this institution as a victor, I need to
run faster and smarter than the rest. I am (ENTER NAME) and I am currently pursing (….).
I am from a very normal family which instilled within me the importance college has in one’s
life and I, being someone willing to throw myself at opportunities and change, opted for the life here
at UniSA, hoping that this is my golden ticket for a life that will not be lost amongst the maddening
crowd. Success, I have learned is not something that can be compromised upon because it comes
before everything.
I have an interest in taking up content creation as my career based on the knowledge I
gather and my inherent creative skills given how sought after and interesting, jobs in those sectors
are. After completing college, all the while networking and gaining profitable experience through
various opportunities this institution provides me with, I wish to gain commendable experience in
content creation and then work as a freelancer, while serving various clients.
NAME: STUDENT USER NAME:

ASSESSMENT 2 COMM1068
PARAGRAPH 2: ARGUMENTATIVE
FIRST DRAFT
Please cut and paste your ARGUMENTATIVE PARAGRAPH from the week 3 discussion board
below:
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Red is an important colour.
It is impossible to ignore the brilliance of the colour red against any background one can
think off. The said colour is a primary colour that is necessary for the concoction of other colours. It
is colour wildly seen on flags and help us as the colour of love (Morton 1997). Of course it is
important.
The colour red is taught to children as the colour of apples. It is one of the first words that
happens to be uttered by children. It is a common occurrence in books given the hugely
metaphorical importance it retains. The colour red is often depicted as the colour that embodies
passion in romance novels. It talks of blood in stories of war. It talks of wine and meat in cookbooks.
It is an integral colour of humanity, not as evident as blue skies tend to be, but we are composed of
(Petru 2006).
The brilliance of the colour does not stop itself at eclipses, it flutters bravely on national
flags. It stand out when there is a rainbow in the sky or during particularly beautiful sunsets. It
retains enormous significance in our lives, with all its brilliant shades and the ability to incite
unending passion within us.
PARAGRAPH 2: ARGUMENTATIVE
FINAL DRAFT
Please type your EDITED and PROOFED ARGUMENTATIVE PARAGRAPH posting below.
Word count:
Red is an important colour.
It is impossible to ignore the brilliance of the colour red against any background one can
possibly fathom. The said colour is in reality, a primary colour that is necessary for the concoction of
other colours. It is a colour, wildly seen on flags of different countries and as the colour of love
(Morton 1997). Naturally it is of tremendous importance for humanity and artists.
The colour red, is taught to children as the colour of apples. It is one of the first words that
happens to be uttered by children. It is a common occurrence in books given the hugely
metaphorical importance it retains. The colour red is often depicted as the colour that embodies
passion in romance novels. It talks of blood in stories of war. It talks of wine and meat in cookbooks.
NAME: STUDENT USER NAME:

ASSESSMENT 2 COMM1068
It is an integral colour of humanity, not as evident as blue skies tend to be, but we are inherently
composed of it (Petru 2006).
The brilliance of the colour does not stop itself at eclipses; it flutters bravely on national
flags. It stands out when there is a rainbow in the sky or during particularly beautiful sunsets. It
retains enormous significance in our lives, with all its brilliant shades and the ability to incite
unending passion within us.
NAME: STUDENT USER NAME:

ASSESSMENT 2 COMM1068
PARAGRAPH 2 – ARGUMENTATIVE
REFERENCE LIST
Morton, J., 1997. A guide to color symbolism (Vol. 28). Colorcom
Petru, S., 2006. Red, black or white? The dawn of colour symbolism. DocumentaPraehistorica, 33,
pp.203-208.
NAME: STUDENT USER NAME:

ASSESSMENT 2 COMM1068
PARAGRAPH 3: EXPOSITORY
FIRST DRAFT
Please cut and paste your NEWS REPORT from the week 4 discussion board below:
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SPACE ROCK COLLISION IN THE CARIBBEAN
2019 MO, which is an asteroid had hit the atmosphere, right above the Caribbean and had
exploded on 22nd July, this year. There has been a lot of discussion about this space rock because it
had not been detected by NASA.
Asteroids are space rocks that are usually small and orbit the sun like planets do and they
tend to approach the earth’s atmosphere because of the gravitational pull our home planet exhibits.
They tend to affect the earth by bringing about Tsunamis, flattening winds or even shock waves that
can escalate to a catastrophic degree.
The 2019 MO was first spotted when it was at a distance of 310000 miles from the surface of
the earth, which translates to a distance that is even farther than the moon, and at that distance it
has appeared as something that is miniscule in nature and thus was not counted in as a threat.
This news garnered media attention across the world given NASA publishing daily reports
about potentially dangerous asteroids that may be passing the earth this year. After the event NASA
stated that asteroids like 2019 Mo are so minuscule in nature that they will inevitably disappear due
to the friction in the atmosphere burning them up even before the reach the surface of the earth.
NAME: STUDENT USER NAME:

ASSESSMENT 2 COMM1068
PARAGRAPH 3: EXPOSITORY
FINAL DRAFT
Please type your EDITED and PROOFED NEWS REPORTbelow.
Word count:
SPACE ROCK COLLISION IN THE CARIBBEAN
2019 MO, which is an asteroid, had hit the atmosphere of the Earth, right above the
Caribbean and had exploded on 22nd July, this year. There has been a lot of discussion about this
space rock because NASA, has failed to detect it.
Asteroids are space rocks that are usually small and orbit the sun like planets do. They tend
to approach the earth’s atmosphere because of the gravitational pull our home planet exhibits. They
tend to affect the life on earth by triggering Tsunamis, flattening winds or even shock waves that can
escalate to a catastrophic degree.
The 2019 MO was first spotted when it was at a distance of 310000 miles from the surface of
the earth, which translates to a distance that is even farther than the distance of the moon from the
earth, and at that distance it had appeared as something that is miniscule in nature and thus was not
counted in as a threat.
This news garnered media attention across the world because of NASA frequently publishing
daily reports about potentially dangerous asteroids that may be passing the earth this year. After the
event, NASA stated that asteroids like 2019 Mo are so minuscule in nature that they will inevitably
disappear due to the friction in the atmosphere burning them up, even before the reach the surface
of the earth.
NAME: STUDENT USER NAME: