Business Communication: Portfolio of Communication Materials and Reflection on Academic Progress

Running head: BUSINESS COMMUNICATION
BUSINESS COMMUNICATION
Name of the Student
Name of the University
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BUSINESS COMMUNICATION
Part A: Portfolio of communication materials
Email to Staffs
To
The employees
Commonwealth Bank
Australia
Subject: Event Announcement.
Dear Employees,
I, Emily Hudson, am the communication manager of Commonwealth Bank seeks you
concern attention about an important matter of the organisation. We are conducting a dinner
event on 15th December 2018 at Westin Hotel at Martin Place, Sydney. The main event starts
from 6 pm in the evening and lasts till 11 pm at night. I, on behalf of the Commonwealth Bank of
Australia, need your participation in the fulfilment of the event.
Commonwealth Bank organises this event year in December and this year also we will
celebrate the day of rejoicing. We are hoping that your presence will encourage us and grace the
event occasion. There are some celebrities and a chief guest will come and this will be a huge
occasion for us when the man come and shed light on the event. The name of the chief guest is
‘Clover Moore' the honourable mayor of Sydney and she will inaugurate and enlighten the ‘Free
Child Account Scheme' for children in Commonwealth Bank. In case of celebrities ‘Kylie
Minogue’ and ‘Liam Hemsworth’ will come on that event and make some sparkling presence.
Therefore, I will request on behalf of the entire management to come and evolve the level of the
party in an extraordinary way. Your participation is the major boost for us and therefore I request
all of you to be the part of this.
Thanking you
Date: 30.05.2018
Emily Hudson
Communications Manager
Commonwealth Bank of Australia

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BUSINESS COMMUNICATION
Email to Special guest
To
Clover Moore
The Prime Minister of Australia
Australia
Subject: Requesting for your presence in the event organized by Commonwealth Bank
Respected Sir,
With all gratitude and humbleness, I want a concerned look of you at my declaration. I
want to request you to please come on 15th December 2018 at Westin Hotel at Martin Place,
Sydney. We, Commonwealth Bank of Australia has organised a dinner event and we have
selected you as our chief guest.
The event is very common one and in every year it happens in different placed of
Australia. The important of the event is to provide enough motivation to employees and help
them to relax their mind. We have decided to start ‘Free Child Account Scheme' in our bank and
we want that you, as our chief guest, inaugurated the process. The party starts at 6 pm and last
until 11 pm at night. I know you have some pre-planned occasion and you have to do those at
first. I have due respect with all of these, we just want a merely 30minutes or 1 hour time to
come with us and make shed of light on the occasion. This will be a huge boost for me and our
employees also if you come to our event and make us blessed.
I, Communication manager of Commonwealth Bank, request on behalf of my entire management
to come to this grand event and oblige us.
Thanking you
Date: 30.05.2018