Develop Strong Business Writing Skills

Section 12
Question 4
To: @accm.edu.au gmail.com
CC: [e-mail]
From: [e-mail]
subject: To get approval from the manager to hold a fundraising morning tea activity to make
fund for the Jeans and genes.
Hi, this email is in regard to get the approval for the morning tea activity in the organization.
As jeans and genes is the charity mission for the families who have incurable genetic disease.
therefore, our staff members also ready to raise the fund therefore we are asking for your
permission. Also to approve the morning tea on Friday and give approval to employee to
bring the food plate.
It will be beneficial if you revert back to this email.
Thank you
Section 18
Question 6
1 as the whole document is written in the times new roman as because it uses the space
economically.
2 line spacing use for the document is same for whole statement as it make the whole section
readable
3 white space is use as it removes the distraction reader only focus on main content
4 written in caps word it give the highlight to the main point.
also the chart is included which give good representation of the information
Section 19
Question 1
ACCM NewsletterApril 21.doc
as this will involve the proper information as marked date
Question 2
It is important as to save the customer file in conventional work environment. it allow to
rapidly identify the file ibn directories.
Question 3
System based software is best
It helps us out in measuring performance as well as finding errors of each content.
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a will be the best option for saving the name files.
Section 17
Question 11
Email to: [e-mail]
Subject: Thank you for your help
Dear Lisa,
I want to thank you for the help and support you have offered me on my recent project.
I am very grateful to you as you have taken out your precious time from your busy
schedule to answer all of my questions. Without your help, I doubt i would have been able to
complete the project on time.
I consider myself as a very fortunate person for having a chance to work with you
Lisa. I am looking forward to implementing all your valuable suggestions.
Thank you once again.
Sincerely,
Riley
Question 12
Patrick Green
44 market street
Hometown NSW 2112
Jen Humphries
54 Training Street Hometown NSW 2112
Hi Jen,
I'm writing this letter because I really need your help. As You're the only person who knows
me better, and I believe you can give me a specific recommendation to solve my problem.
Recently I saw an advertise in a paper, which is about offering a free journalism course to
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the successful applicants. I send them an revert in form of article in this I wrote for the uni
student newspaper as it is about the government funding for courses.
Anyway, they very liked it, but as there are only five places for which they want a reference
as well. I haven't given them your name yet, as I expect this would be the first reference
you've been requested to give. Is it OK if I sent them your phone number. I think they want
contact you so they can have a proper conversation with you and find out all information
about me!
I know it's been a while but if you could do it, it'd really help me out. I've got a new phone
number,(02) 42 95 96 97, so you can get me on that, and my address is always the same.
Hope to heard good from you.
Regards Patrick
Section 16
Question 2
S Smith
16 Lighting Road,
Lancaster, NSW 2222
Date:
Subject: Aim to inform about the bad delivery service facility provided by the company.
Dear Mrs Smith,
As a potential customer of your company I have always enjoyed the services provided by
your company but recently I have been facing a problem in delivery of the product.
The manufacturer for the product and service recently facing a Bankruptcy problem
therefore we need to search new manufacturer in a short time so there will be no delay in
production process. To add in this some of the employees are taking off from the job due to
their personal reasons which I found difficulty in managing all the things. I have found the
one manufacturer by my own but they are not working at cheap price, but their services are
even better from the existing one they also have the espresso coffee machines. This changes
will be relevant for the potential customer. The new manufacturer has the big contracts with
the other suppliers in the market therefore it implies that we have to make one large order in
every 3 month instead of ordering monthly.
Therefore because of this you must have to make the order in the 3 month so that you will
receive the services at a time. I know that you always proceed to make order in a month but
you must have to adapt the changes. You are requested to lodge your order on the basis of
quarterly so there will be no ambiguity. Also you are requested to note this in your reminder
so that you will not forget to order advance in 3 month.
Thanking you
Yours Sincerely
Dave Wright
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Sales Manager
Bottle Up!
Question 5
the best formatting which involves the white space
same fonts throughout the project,
same line spacing which makes the reader to read the content
space before starting the new paragraph
as in this example the font size, line spacing use of language is same.
Section 15
Question 7
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