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Critique on peer revised paper

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Analyze characteristics of exemplary business communication
The original post presented discusses about the financial state of a company in the current
scenario. The original post has been made comprehensively but requires certain improvements.
The post has stated the article’s intension to discuss about on the important matters. But
analyzing the main purpose of any article provides a clear understanding to the readers (Bhatia,
2014). The original post has mentioned about the purpose of informing the informing the internal
as well as the external shareholders. The review has identified the assets of the company with
appropriate definitions.
The article consists of relevant characters such as the employees, shareholders, media and
authorities. They have been mentioned according to their role in the article reviewed. All the
characters fall under the internal and external shareholders of the company as mentioned in the
peer reviewed article.
The peer reviewed article has identified a single example from the article. The example
provided mentions about the financial position report. The example has been stated by help of
credible sources that validate the reliability of the example. As we can see in the example the
equity in June 2017 was intangible which means that it would be difficult for the company
recover in form of economic benefit. The example has suggested that investors must focus on in
terms of adversity intangible assets.
It can be understood that the original post is free of any ambiguity and has provided an
unclear picture of the chosen article (Bazley, Hancock & Robinson, 2014). According to the
financial position report presented, it has been stated that in order to clearly understand the
company's financial position in present times, it is important to review other documents also such
as companies financial reports, annual reports, shareholder reports, interim reports and other
relevant documents.

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References
Bazley, M., Hancock, P., & Robinson, P. (2014). Contemporary Accounting PDF. Melbourne,
Australia: Cengage Learning Australia.
Bhatia, V. K. (2014). Analysing genre: Language use in professional settings. Abingdon, UK:
Routledge.