On Being an Atheist: A Critical Analysis

This article critically analyzes H.J. McCloskey's 'On Being an Atheist', addressing his arguments against the existence of God and the problem of evil. McCloskey's arguments are examined both theologically and cosmologically, and his claims are evaluated in light of counterarguments from other scholars.

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The article, “On Being an Atheist” by McCloskey addresses all the readers that their
beliefs in being a theist is reasonable and comfortable than the contemptuous beliefs of the
theists who worships a God that does not exist. He ardently puts his arguments forward both
theologically and cosmologically. McCloskey also presents his reason for the Problem of Evil
and why bad or evil cannot exist without the concept of a “perfect” God. He states that all their
“beings” and Demi Gods that exists just need a reason to exist. McCloskey claims that the very
idea of humans that a superior being has created this Universe is absurd and incorrect. He refutes
the theological and cosmological beliefs of the existence of an omnipotent being often referred to
as God (Berman). He put all his arguments forward stating why he thinks that a creator is a
misconceived notion of man and faith does not help when one is in grave crisis.
McCloskey places all his arguments very tactfully and rationally. He argues that the very
fact that Christian’s opinions for God is something that cannot be definitively established.
Hence, anything that cannot be definitively established should be rejected. What he tries to point
out is that Christians are only making vague arguments without backing up their arguments with
accurate proofs. Stephen Evans had mentioned that the Christians are not stating anything that is
their own, rather they are only believing in the probability of a God or higher, superhuman being
(Bullivant, Stephen, and Ruse). After McCloskey addresses the notions of various proofs he then
specifically targets the cosmological and theological arguments. In his attempt to cite the
“defects” of the cosmological arguments he states that the existence of the world holds no reason
to believe in the existence of a superior being. He further mentions that if we study the very
nature of every object on earth then we would notice that these objects do not exists necessarily.
There is not a single living thing that owes its existence to another living thing. Therefore,
McCloskey is of the opinion that the very fact that these contingent beings should have a

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necessary being in order to love and exist considering a string of contingent beings only leads to
infinite retrogress with no logical explanation to a cause. To this, Stephen Evans says that the
very fact that a necessary being is the one and only being whose existence does not require
further explanations. He says that there requires an ultimatum for the existence of a contingent
being only if there is an necessary being. McCloskey writes, “This objection is one way of
putting Kant’s criticism that the cosmological proof involves the ontological proof.” The reader
feels that he is actually correct. The cosmological argument, as it stands, is not arguing for
particular attributes of the uncaused cause. There is no room in the premise of the argument for
such attributes. On the other hand McCloskey is trying to defeat the cosmological argument by
stating that the ontological proof must play a factor in the argument. Neither is this stipulation
evident nor is it necessary for the ontological to be involved in the cosmological. All the
cosmological argument is stating (as laid out above) is that an uncaused cause must be the
explanation for contingent beings. Therefore, McCloskey has travelled quite a bit further out
past the limits of his own assertion.
He then focuses on the theological argument and says that, “To get the proof going,
genuine indisputable examples of design or purpose are needed. There are no such indisputable
examples, so the proof does not get going at all” (McCloskey). What he tries to say is simply
that since the proof is ‘indisputable’ it should be rejected completely. As has already been
pointed out, the teleological argument is not being used deductively but rather inferentially as the
best explanation available. Moreover, since it is inferential, it does not follow that a proof must
either be indisputably proved or rejected. All that is necessary for an inferential proof is that the
proof be probable. Evans states that, “The arguments can be rejected, but the person who rejects
them pays a price. For to deny a proposition is logically equivalent to asserting another

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proposition. To deny p is to assert not-p.” Evans tries to say that McCloskey would have to
reject every notion based on his own standard. Other counterfactuals to McCloskey’s assertion
are the magnetic field and black holes as was addressed in Lesson eighteen (McCloskey).
Neither of these can be indisputably proved using the scientific method yet scientists adhere to
those particular views based on what are the best explanations available. Christians are no
different when positing an intelligent designer to explain the appearance of purposiveness in the
natural order. Therefore, McCloskey is overreaching when he states that his indisputability
method is a “very conclusive objection” (Taylor).
The two great examples of teleological arguments that provide, inferentially, a proof for
the existence of God are not only the features of “design” in the universe but also the nature of
its measurability (Taylor). Stephen Hawking notes that, “If the rate of expansion one second after
the big bang had been smaller by even one part in a hundred thousand million, the universe
would have recollapsed before it ever reached its present size.” Dr. Guillermo Gonzalez in his
article “The Measurability of the Universe – A Record of the Creator’s Design” says that
“Humanity’s home planet is a comfortable porch from which curious humans can gaze out to the
ends of time and space.” The Universe is either the product of a large scale accident or it is not
(Taylor). McCloskey, on the other hand, has made no case for an elegant accident in his
attempted refutation of the teleological argument. McCloskey however, tries to replace the
appearance of the designer with evolution as he says, “So many things which were, before the
theory of evolution, construed as evidence of design and purpose, are now seen to be nothing of
the sort” (McCloskey). He does not acknowledge is that evolution, or more specifically
macroevolution, has not been conclusively proved – a detail that he ignores outright when solely
focusing on the “indisputability” nature of the argument from design (Mosk). We can assume for

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a moment that McCloskey is right and that evolution is the reason for “design” in nature, it still
doesn’t provide a concrete reason for evolution in the first place (Corner). Evolution can only
mechanistically explain the process of change but not the reason for the existence of any such
change.
McCloskey also focuses his attention on the presence of evil in the world as a means to
refute both the cosmological and teleological arguments. The cosmological and teleological
argument never addresses the notion of morality (Taylor). Evans writes, “By itself, the
(cosmological) argument only seems to show the existence of a necessary being that is the cause
of the universe.” By itself, the teleological also seems to only show an intelligent being. The two
arguments strive to prove nothing more than that. Therefore, the concept of evil that McCloskey
is trying to use as a rejoinder to those specific arguments is completely irrelevant. He tries to say
that if there was a God who was perfect then he would not allow any evil or any immoral things
to happen (Grayling). Since immoral and evil things, happen all the time it just means that there
is no such being as God. Evans comes up here with what he calls a “second order good”.
According to Evans if an atheist were to step in front of a bullet to protect a loved one, the fact
that he was shot would be an evil but an evil that garnered a second-order good when he chose to
be courageous and use himself as a shield.
The reader must notice that how callously McCloskey uses the terms “good” and “bad”
without justifying the origins of these terms (Peterson). It is highly questionable that from where
he derives the concept of “good” and “bad” if he does not believe in the moral goodness of God.
Abn atheist, according to Evan is not off the hook when it comes to morality. McCloskey should
explain how these moral terms mean anything if there is not a standard from which to judge.
Saying that, while good and evil do exist, there is no God seems to be the equivalent of saying

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that, while McCloskey’s article evidently exists, there is no McCloskey himself. Thus his
argument for evil is vague and irrational. McCloskey also talks about “free will.” Thomas Hardy
had mentioned about the “immanent will” that directs the lives of every man on Earth. There is a
problem how McCloskey defines free will. Free will cannot exist in the libertarian sense and if it
is God who is behind it then one cannot choose freely. Therefore, the hypothetical that
McCloskey employs here seems rather implausible without further argument. What we must
understand is that God cannot actualize all possible worlds as McCloskey and Mackie suggests
as God does not have any control over human free will (Ryan).
McCloskey further says that atheism provides comfort and consolation in pain and
suffering than believing in an omnipotent other worldly being. Criag in his essay make three
crucial points. The first point is that, given the second law of thermodynamics, all things in the
universe are moving towards decay (Criag). The atheist should ask himself that whether there is
a point to existence in the first place since all things die. The second point is that, in a world
with no God, humans actually have no value. Morality and ethics become nothing more than
simple statements about different types of ice cream flavors. In other words, no objective moral
standard can exist without God. Lastly, humans have no purpose without God. They are merely
accidents of random variation that appear to exist based on chance but only for a short while
before losing everything they have strived for and acquired. If death really is all that awaits us
then the atheist cannot find comfort, as McCloskey suggests, only despair.

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