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Suggestions for Improving the Research Paper on Events Management

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Added on  2023-04-07

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This document provides expert suggestions for improving a research paper on events management. It covers areas such as the abstract, methodology, literature review, and more. The suggestions aim to make the research more focused and relevant to the topic.

Suggestions for Improving the Research Paper on Events Management

   Added on 2023-04-07

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Comment Action Page no.
I could not see the relevance of
mid-size event company in the
text or literature review.
Added explanation Page no. 35
The intentions of the customers
to purchase goods and services
should be the main focus of the
research to reflect the title and
the main aim of the research.
you focused on events
management (if is this your
focus, then why?)
Made changes Page no. 9
Could your research be a case
study? I could not find the
discussion chapter (but it seems
it is written in the data analysis
chapter this need to be
divided into 2 chapters.
Already divided Page no 119
The quantitative data is very
descriptive – how the data can
be linked to your aim and
objectives?
Done changes Page no 111
All hypotheses need to be
explained and re-defined.
Tables in pages 111 – 114 need
to be explained further and
linked to hypotheses and then
aim and objectives of the
research.
Added explanation Page no 111- 114
The abstract is too long, and
you need to add the keywords
Made changes Page no 2
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