Discussion Posts - Critique One Peer Post
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Post 2: Critique one peer post
The post of my peer (friend’s name) of Business Communication is well written,
however, I found certain drawbacks to the post as well. First aspect missing in the post is proper
structuring and font size. The post is difficult to read as it has not been uniformly structured. The
post given by my peer is comprehensive however missing the key component of the article from
the beginning. The post starts in a descriptive manner. It is more oriented towards describing
business communication and interpersonal communication.
The post focused on analysing the characteristics of exemplary business communication
through investigation of specific communication form selected by the facilitator and research,
which makes it effective. Yet the post in the first, as well as the second paragraph, went on to
describe the very nature of business communication without establishing a connection between
the article provided or the style used by our facilitator. The post only in the last paragraph
describes the article that has been provided on Harvard Psychologists Amy Cuddy. The missing
characteristics in the post is to establish a connection between the article (as stated in the last
paragraph) and the lessons regarding exemplary business communication (first two paragraphs)
as taught in class (Khan & Khan, 2012).
The post has identified plausible characteristics of exemplary business communication
and has also discussed in-depth regarding interpersonal communication. However, the post
appears a mere paraphrasing from the materials that have been provided in the class and the
inability to consolidate or criticize the materials together with learning (Okoro, Washington &
Thomas, 2017). The post fails to identify any example with its suitability. The major drawback
of this post is not being able to provide a real-life example to its readers, hence, in my opinion, it
fails to convince its readers. There are no concrete examples provided in support of all the styles
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The post of my peer (friend’s name) of Business Communication is well written,
however, I found certain drawbacks to the post as well. First aspect missing in the post is proper
structuring and font size. The post is difficult to read as it has not been uniformly structured. The
post given by my peer is comprehensive however missing the key component of the article from
the beginning. The post starts in a descriptive manner. It is more oriented towards describing
business communication and interpersonal communication.
The post focused on analysing the characteristics of exemplary business communication
through investigation of specific communication form selected by the facilitator and research,
which makes it effective. Yet the post in the first, as well as the second paragraph, went on to
describe the very nature of business communication without establishing a connection between
the article provided or the style used by our facilitator. The post only in the last paragraph
describes the article that has been provided on Harvard Psychologists Amy Cuddy. The missing
characteristics in the post is to establish a connection between the article (as stated in the last
paragraph) and the lessons regarding exemplary business communication (first two paragraphs)
as taught in class (Khan & Khan, 2012).
The post has identified plausible characteristics of exemplary business communication
and has also discussed in-depth regarding interpersonal communication. However, the post
appears a mere paraphrasing from the materials that have been provided in the class and the
inability to consolidate or criticize the materials together with learning (Okoro, Washington &
Thomas, 2017). The post fails to identify any example with its suitability. The major drawback
of this post is not being able to provide a real-life example to its readers, hence, in my opinion, it
fails to convince its readers. There are no concrete examples provided in support of all the styles
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of business communication that has been explained, it is a mere representation of all the facts
provided in paragraph format.
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provided in paragraph format.
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