Persuasive Essay: Establishing Democratic Government in Iraq

The assignment is a persuasive essay that argues for the implementation of three amendments from the Bill of Rights (First, Fourth, and Tenth) in Iraq to establish a democratic government. The essay provides logical reasons for selecting these amendments and discusses their potential impact on the Iraqi people's rights and freedoms.

Establishing a Democratic Government in Iraq
Persuasive Essay #1 (Bill of Rights)

Introduction
The Transparency International presented Iraq is the most corrupt government in the
Middle East. It is described as a hybrid regime because of a flawed democracy. The report Costs
of War, in 2011, concluded that the U.S. military presence in Iraq cannot ensure that there will
be no corruption in the political setup of Iraq. According to this report, there are clear signs that
post-Saddam Iraq was not established to enhance democracy in Iraq (Hasan, 2018).
I am a representative from the United States Government in Iraq. My objective is to help
establish a democratic government. I persuade the Iraqis to give their basic constitutional rights. I
select three Amendments from America’s Bill of Rights. This essay contains persuasive
arguments articulating the necessity of adopting these rights.
The Ten Amendments in the Bill of Rights
The first 10 amendments in the Constitution are known as the Bill of Rights. These amendments
are:
1. Congress cannot make any law based on religion, or prevent free exercise for speech,
press, right of people peaceably to assemble, and to petition the Government for
redress of grievances.
2. The security of a free state needs a well-regulated Militia.
3. Soldiers shall not be quartered in any house during the time of peace, without consent
of the owner, but according to the law.
4. People have the right to be secure in houses, papers, and effects against unsecure
searchers, shall not be violated, but for probable cause, supported by Oath.
5. People are not held to be answer for capital, unless or presentment of a Grand Jury.

6. In the criminal prosecutions, the accused can enjoy the right to a speedy, and public
trial, by an impartial jury of the state.
7. In the suit at common law, where the worth in controversy shall exceed 20 dollars,
the right of trial through jury shall be preserved.
8. Excessive bail is not required, no excessive fine imposed, and no cruel punishments
9. The enumeration in constitution, for certain rights, shall not be construed to deny
others retained by the people.
10. Powers are not delegated to the United States by constriction, but are reserved to the
states respectively or to the people (https://www.soundvision.com/, 2020).
These amendments have a direct impact on the life of people in the United States. There
are many rights of citizens in the United States. From these 10 amendments, I discuss the First
Amendment, Fourth Amendment, and Tenth Amendment to provide basic constitutional rights to
the Iraqis. There are clear reasons behind the selection of these three amendments.
The Three Amendments for Iraqi Government
The First Amendment is about to provide the rights of freedom of speech, press,
peaceable assembly, religion, and petition for redress of grievances. The implementation of the
first amendment is logical for Iraqis as in this way they can express themselves freely, they can
obey their religion, and they have freedom of speech. All these aspects are necessary to establish
a democratic government in Iraq.
The Fourth Amendment is about the right of people to be secure in their persons, houses,
papers, and effect, against unreasonable searches and seizures, shall not be violated, and no
warrants shall issue but upon probable cause, supported by oath or affirmation, and particularly
describing the place to be searched, and the persons or things to be seized. In the current

situation of Iraq, people feel insure for their rights to be secure in their houses. They are not
protected for unreasonable searches. Even they are not violating the rules, but facing offensive
situations. In such conditions the implementation of the fourth amendment from the Bill of
Rights may have a positive effect. It can help to promote democracy in Iraq.
The Tenth Amendment consists of details about the delegation of power. According to
the constitution, power is not delegated to the United States. The power is reserved to the States
respectively, or to the people. That means if the tenth amendment from the Bill of Rights is
implemented in Iraq, it helps to distribute the power to Iraqis. In this way, they can establish a
political system under democracy. It could help the country to create new legislation, and
political preferences in accordance with the concern of the majority of people.
In order to establish a democratic government in Iraq, the Bill of Rights comprises all
necessary details about managing people and human resources. The Bill of Rights is an official
document with amendments in the constitution. These amendments are helpful for people in Iraq
to gain their lost status in the country. It can help in dictating the rights and improve the
legislative situation to prevent violation of freedom rights. In case of failure of these
implementations of the three amendments, may make the Iraqi constitution ineffective for certain
aspects of law.
Conclusion
In conclusion, implementing these three amendments of Bill of Rights is logical as these
are the key amendments for people or citizens to protect their rights against government. These
amendments can prevent the abuse of power of Iraqi government. By the enactment of these
rights, the local government may have limited their rights. On the other side, as a representative,
I can help to implement these three amendments successfully for the betterment of Iraqis.

Logically it is good for the life of millions of people in Iraq who have lost their rights. I shall
participate for the betterment of their life. By implementing these amendments, a democratic
government can run successfully. The Bill of Rights is an essential aspect to protect the rights of
people in Iraq, and avoid exploitation by limiting the powers of the government.

References
Hasan, H. (2018). The truth about Iraq’s democracy. https://www.atlanticcouncil.org/, 1-5.
https://www.soundvision.com/. (2020). Constitutional Amendments 1-10: The Bill of Rights.
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