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BMS1052 Human Neurobiology

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The assignment is a writing sample in which a passage is given. The purpose of the assignment is to help the students to identify the errors and problems contains in the passage. After reading the given case study the learner will identify the errors and problems in the assignment.

BMS1052 Human Neurobiology

   Added on 2019-10-30

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Section/Concept Mark (100)Comment Title 3/4The title reflects one of therequired components, andthus, it can be considered ascoherent and relevant to theentire part written within thearticle.Opening paragraph 10/12Few of the requiredcomponents have beenhighlighted in the start of theparagraph. Moreover, it statesthat the basis of theexperiments done. The articlehelps in maintaining thereader's interest.Argument 20/24The argument producedthroughout the paper wascoherent, and it was madestrictly to the question ofplaying of Mozart Sonata fortwo pianos for 10 minutes.Research 21/20The research is good, but thereare few more points related tothe topic that needs to beincluded and supported withevidence. There were few ofthe errors found within thesources and the statements.Less number of factualmistakes, as well as thecontent, seems to be good.Presentation 14/20The presentation could bemade better as some of theparts were unclear and notassociated with the followingparagraphs effectively. Thework contains numerousgrammatical errors such as theuse of prepositions, and many2 | Page
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