ESL41 Isata Sowa Topic 2022

Isata Sowa
ESL 41
April 2, 2020
1. Introduction (Paragraph 1)
A. Hook: In todays global advancement, why are women not having equal opportunities as their male
counterparts?
B. Connecting information: There have been brave women serving their countries in different capacities
and have been very successful.
C. Thesis statement: Many people think women are weak to be in the military. Women should be
allowed to serve in the military because on gender equality and if they meet the physical
requirements. Inadequacy in the enrolment option gives rise to difficulty in access to higher
education leading to difficulty in attaining higher posts.
2. Body
A. Paragraph 2 topic sentence: allowing women in the military gives them access to education
1. They can attend schools and can afford to pay.
2. It will enable them to sustain independence financially and will lead to further rise in education
among women.
3. Improve their career growth and opportunities.
B. Paragraph 3 topic sentence: Women can increase the military size.
1. They can volunteer to be recruited.
2. They can be easily trained and are quick to adapt.
3. They can help in combat to save lives in roles as nurses, and doctors.
C. Women will have the opportunity to gain endurance and physical strength.
1. Learn survival skills and build endurance through training.
2. They can protect themselves against physical abuses.