AN ANALYSIS OF THE WRITTEN GRAMMATICAL ERRORS

Locate errors in grammar, syntax, punctuation, and capitalization in the sample text which
deliberately has been constructed with errors. Rewrite it by correcting the identified errors.
Somewhere, somehow we stumbles upon people, who in their own special way, has perfected the
art of spinning the wheel of manipulation to the tune TWERK IT LIKE MILEY. They twerks to
exercise undue influence through mental distorted and emotional explotation with the intention to
turn friends into foes, calm into conflict and heaven into hell. And once they open the gates of hell,
they possess power and control benefits and opportunities to advance their personal ambition and
political persuasion. Most of these kinds I encounter personally are those who wears pants and
briefs in public places and categorically find satisfaction and joy to wear floral skirts and fuchsia
panties in their own private solitary room. Most of them are very respectability publicly but scream
like a faggot privately. They may go to the gym to flexed their muscle but at the outset, they just
wanted to see some muscle flexed before their very eyes. They possess the worst attitude in the
world. They are ready to betray, destroy, and annihilate people that would go against them and
expose their true identity.
But ironically, some of them put up a weak, helpless, needy and sometimes “victimized” or
underdog façade to carry out their plans rooted in satisfying their whims and caprice. Obviously,
they blend likes chameleon, disguise likes terrorist, and assure like politicians And since they
don’t bloom where they’re planted and they are not that competent in what they do, they survive
by licking boots of the higher ups who happens to be constant in need of larger doses of exaltation,
adoration and adulation At some junctures together they act as back up voices in the hallelujah
chorus since pathetically, he are not gifted with angelic voice as well. They tell the higher ups that
YES there are problems indeed cause by some people they are envious of or people, with their
presence, make them second best, trying hard copycat. They gossip to create more conflict. They lie
to spread more skirmishes. They cheats to oppresses more of their kind. In a sanitary, sophisticated
and stylish manner.
These hypocritical harlots get promoted by simply currying favor with the fellow ugly gods and
goddesses, following the latter from behind to demonstrate their phony loyalty. They are surrounded
by a lot of self-esteem issues and their primary happiness is shaped by the number of likes and
comments in their facebook, instagram and twitter posts.
The apostle Paul call them the accuser of the brethren, greek mythology brands them as Eris,
goddess of discord, and jesuschrist labels them as wolves in sheep’s clothing.
In the event that you encounter such kind of troll, just acknowledge their hypocritical behavior,
keep your cool and don’t allow their actions and intentions to affect your everyday undertakings.
After all, most of them just bark, but don’t bite. Just think that they are the proof that the world was
not painted black and white, but painted with the colors of the rainbow.
As long as you do your part to better life for yourself and for people around you, allow everyone
to exist in whatever form or function they intend to. After all, there is somehow unity in diversity.

Errors:
GRAMMAR:
 we stumbles—Subject pronoun “WE” and the verb “STUMBLES” isn’t proper.
CORRECT TERM TO USE: stumble
 encounter personally are those who wears—Wrong usage of term
CORRECT TERM TO USE: wear
 TWERK IT LIKE MILEY—Should not be all capitalized
CORRECT: Add quotation marks “Twerk It Like Miley”
 They may go to the gym to flexed—Incorrect usage of verb
CORRECT TERM TO USE: flex
 wanted to see some muscle—May not agree in number in other words of the phrase
CORRECT TERM TO USE: muscles
 they blend likes chameleon ; disguise likes —Contains unnecessary verb
CORRECT: blend like ; disguise like
 politicians And—Linking verb should not be capitalized
CORRECT: politicians and
 he are not gifted—Subject pronoun “HE” does not agree with the verb usage
CORRECT: Change “ARE” to “IS”
 with angelic— Noun phrase lacking
CORRECT: Add “AN” or “THE” at the middle of with and angelic
 They cheats—Subject pronoun and verb does not collide
CORRECT: THEY CHEAT
 Hallelujah—Proper noun should be addressed a first capital letter
CORRECT: Hallelujah
 YES—Word should be addressed to small letters
CORRECT: yes
 kind of troll—Does not agree with the other words in the phrase
CORRECT: KINDS of TROLLS
 chameleon—Lacking article
CORRECT: Add “A” before chameleon
 boots—Lacking linking verb to use
CORRECT: the boots
CONCISENESS:
 own—Makes the phrase wordy
CORRECT: remove (own) from the sentence
 with the intention to —Makes the phrase wordy/vague
CORRECT: remove (with the intention) and leave only “TO” in the sentence
 advance their personal ambition—Makes the phrase wordy
CORRECT: remove (personal) and leave “ADVANCE THEIR AMBITION” in the
sentence
 Obviously, they—Appears wordy

CORRECT: Consider removing the word “OBVIOUSLY” in the sentence to make
it more concise.
 In the event—Appears wordy
CORRECT: Use the word “IF”
SPELLING:
 explotation—Wrong spelling
CORRECT: exploitation
 respectability—Wrong context used
CORRECT: respectful
 apostle-- Wrong context used
CORRECT: Apostle
 greek-- Wrong context used
CORRECT: Greek
 jesuschrist—Wrong context used
CORRECT: Jesus Christ
PUNCTUATION:
 conflict and heaven— Sentence contains series of words/clauses
CORRECT: add a comma before “AND”
 private solidarity—Missing punctuation between private and solidarity
CORRECT: Add a comma between “PRIVATE, SOLIDARITY”
 their muscle—Missing punctuation
CORRECT: Add a comma before coordinating with a conjunction in a compound
sentence. “, BUT”
 helpless, needy and—Lacking punctuation
CORRECT: Add comma before the word “AND”
 they’re planted and—Lacking punctuation.
CORRECT: Add comma before the word “AND”
 higher ups that YES—Lacking punctuation
CORRECT: Add comma after the word “THAT”
 sophisticated and—Lacking punctuation
CORRECT: Add comma before the word “AND”
 At—Lacking punctuation
CORRECT: Add a dot before the word “AT”
 . In a—Misused punctuation
CORRECT: Remove the dot and change the first letter of “IN” into a small one
 higher ups—Wrong spelling
CORRECT: Add hyphen between higher and ups “HIGHER-UPS”
 your cool and—Lacking punctuation
CORRECT: Add comma before the word “AND”
 bark,-- Unnecessary comma
CORRECT: Remove the comma

FORMALITY:
 And once they open—Change the conjunction
CORRECT: usage of “HOWEVER” or “NEVERTHELESS”
 But ironically—Wrong coordinating conjuction
CORRECT: Consider replacing it and use conjunctive adverb such as
“HOWEVER or NEVERTHELESS”
 since they don’t—Contractions like this may be too informal
CORRECT: DO NOT
 a lot of—Considered informal or vague
CORRECT: Use the word “MANY”
CLARITY:
 Most of these kinds I encounter personally are those who wears—Awkward phrasing
CORRECT: Consider paraphrasing into “I ENCOUNTER MOST OR THESE
KINDS PERSONALLY ARE THOSE WHO WEAR”
 They may go to the gym to flexed their muscle but at the outset, they just wanted to see
some muscle flexed before their very eyes—Phrase seems unclear and hard to follow
CORRECT: Consider rephrasing the sentence. “THEY MAY GO TO THE GYM
TO FLEX THEIR MUSCLE, BUT THEY JUST WANTES TO SEE SOME
MUSCLE FLEXED BEFORE THEIR VERY EYES AT THE OUTSET.”
SENSITIVITY:
 faggot—Offensive language
CORRECT: Consider writing reclaimed words such as “QUEER or TRANNY”

Somewhere, somehow we stumble upon people, who in their special way, has perfected
the art of spinning the wheel of manipulation to the tune TWERK IT LIKE MILEY. They twerks to
exercise undue influence through mental distorted and emotional exploitation to turn friends into
foes, calm into conflict, and heaven into hell. Furthermore, once they open the gates of hell,
they possess power and control benefits and opportunities to advance their ambition and
political persuasion. We encounter most of these kinds personally: wear pants and briefs in
public places and categorically find satisfaction and joy to wear floral skirts and fuchsia panties
in their own private, solitary room. Most of them are very respectful publicly but scream
privately. They may go to the gym to flex their muscle, but at the outset, they just wanted to see
some muscles flexed before their very eyes. They possess the worst attitude in the world. They
are ready to betray, destroy, and annihilate people that would go against them and expose their
true identity.
However, ironically, some of them put up a weak, helpless, needy, and sometimes
"victimized" or underdog façade to carry out their plans rooted in satisfying their whims and
caprice. They blend like a chameleon, disguise likes terrorist, and assure politicians, And since
they do not bloom where they are planted. They are not that competent in what they do, and
they survive by licking the boots of the higher-ups who happen to be constant in need of larger
doses of exaltation, adoration, and adulation. At some junctures together, they act as back up
voices in the hallelujah chorus since, pathetically, he is not gifted with an angelic voice as well.
They tell the higher-ups that yes, there are problems indeed cause by some people they are
envious of or people, with their presence, make them second best, trying hard copycat. They
gossip to create more conflict. They lie to spread more skirmishes. They cheat to oppress more
of their kind in a sanitary, sophisticated, and stylish manner.
These hypocritical harlots get promoted by simply currying favor with the fellow ugly
gods and goddesses, following the latter from behind to demonstrate their phony loyalty. Many
self-esteem issues surround them, and their primary happiness is shaped by the number of likes
and comments on their Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter posts. The apostle Paul calls them the
brethren's accuser, greek mythology brands them as Eris, goddess of discord, and Jesus Christ
labels them as wolves in sheep's clothing. If each encounters such kinds of trolls, acknowledge
their hypocritical behavior, keep one's cool, and do not allow their actions and intentions to
affect everyday undertakings. After all, most of them bark but do not bite. Just think that they are
the proof that the world was not painted black and white, but painted with the colors of the
rainbow. As long as one has done his/her part to a better life for oneself and people around,
allow everyone to exist in whatever form or function they intend to. After all, there is somehow
unity in diversity.