AN ANALYSIS OF THE WRITTEN GRAMMATICAL ERRORS
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Added on 2021-06-05
AN ANALYSIS OF THE WRITTEN GRAMMATICAL ERRORS
Added on 2021-06-05
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Locate errors in grammar, syntax, punctuation, and capitalization in the sample text whichdeliberately has been constructed with errors. Rewrite it by correcting the identified errors.Somewhere, somehow we stumbles upon people, who in their own special way, has perfected theart of spinning the wheel of manipulation to the tune TWERK IT LIKE MILEY. They twerks toexercise undue influence through mental distorted and emotional explotation with the intention toturn friends into foes, calm into conflict and heaven into hell. And once they open the gates of hell,they possess power and control benefits and opportunities to advance their personal ambition andpolitical persuasion. Most of these kinds I encounter personally are those who wears pants andbriefs in public places and categorically find satisfaction and joy to wear floral skirts and fuchsiapanties in their own private solitary room. Most of them are very respectability publicly but screamlike a faggot privately. They may go to the gym to flexed their muscle butat the outset, they justwanted to see some muscle flexed before their very eyes. They possess the worst attitude in theworld. They are ready to betray, destroy, and annihilate people that would go against them andexpose their true identity.But ironically, some of them put up a weak, helpless, needy and sometimes “victimized” orunderdog façade to carry out their plans rooted in satisfying their whims and caprice. Obviously,they blend likes chameleon, disguise likes terrorist, and assure like politicians And since theydon’t bloom where they’re plantedandthey are not that competent in what they do, they surviveby licking boots of the higher ups who happens to be constant in need of larger doses of exaltation,adoration and adulation At some junctures together they act as back up voices in the hallelujahchorus since pathetically, he are not gifted with angelic voice as well. They tell the higher ups thatYES there are problems indeed cause by some people they are envious of or people, with theirpresence, make them second best, trying hard copycat. They gossip to create more conflict. They lieto spread more skirmishes. They cheats to oppresses more of their kind. In a sanitary, sophisticatedand stylish manner.These hypocritical harlots get promoted by simply currying favor with the fellow ugly gods andgoddesses, following the latter from behind to demonstrate their phony loyalty. They are surroundedby a lot of self-esteem issues and their primary happiness is shaped by the number of likes andcomments in their facebook, instagram and twitter posts.The apostle Paul call them the accuser of the brethren, greek mythology brands them as Eris,goddess of discord, and jesuschrist labels them as wolves in sheep’s clothing.In the event that you encounter such kind of troll, just acknowledge their hypocritical behavior,keep your cool anddon’t allow their actions and intentions to affect your everyday undertakings.After all, most of them just bark, but don’t bite. Just think that they are the proof that the world wasnot painted black and white, but painted with the colors of the rainbow.As long as you do your part to better life for yourself and for people around you, allow everyoneto exist in whatever form or function they intend to. After all, there is somehow unity in diversity.
Errors:GRAMMAR:we stumbles—Subject pronoun “WE” and the verb “STUMBLES” isn’t proper.CORRECT TERM TO USE: stumbleencounter personally are those whowears—Wrong usage of termCORRECT TERM TO USE: wearTWERK IT LIKE MILEY—Should not be all capitalizedCORRECT: Add quotation marks “Twerk It Like Miley”They may go to the gym to flexed—Incorrect usage of verbCORRECT TERM TO USE: flexwanted to see some muscle—May not agree in number in other words of the phraseCORRECT TERM TO USE: musclesthey blend likes chameleon ; disguise likes—Contains unnecessary verbCORRECT: blend like ; disguise likepoliticians And—Linking verb should not be capitalizedCORRECT: politicians andhe are not gifted—Subject pronoun “HE” does not agree with the verb usageCORRECT: Change “ARE” to “IS”with angelic— Noun phrase lacking CORRECT: Add “AN” or “THE” at the middle of with and angelicThey cheats—Subject pronoun and verb does not collideCORRECT: THEY CHEATHallelujah—Proper noun should be addressed a first capital letterCORRECT: HallelujahYES—Word should be addressed to small lettersCORRECT: yeskind of troll—Does not agree with the other words in the phraseCORRECT: KINDS of TROLLSchameleon—Lacking articleCORRECT: Add “A” before chameleonboots—Lacking linking verb to useCORRECT: the bootsCONCISENESS:own—Makes the phrase wordyCORRECT: remove (own) from the sentencewith the intention to —Makes the phrase wordy/vagueCORRECT: remove (with the intention) and leave only “TO” in the sentenceadvance their personal ambition—Makes the phrase wordyCORRECT: remove (personal) and leave “ADVANCE THEIR AMBITION” in thesentenceObviously, they—Appears wordy
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