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The assignment is to write an essay discussing the solutions to social inequality inspired by the article 'Why Hasn’t Democracy Slowed Rising Inequality?' The essay should include comments, criticism, and the student's personal point of view about the article.

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Added on  2023-06-03

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This is a peer-review form for a draft version of an essay. It covers various aspects of the essay such as the introduction, central question, paragraph structure, grammar, tone, and sources used. The form provides clear comments on each aspect and indicates whether it is included or not. The form also gives suggestions for improvement where necessary.

Peer-review Form

The assignment is to write an essay discussing the solutions to social inequality inspired by the article 'Why Hasn’t Democracy Slowed Rising Inequality?' The essay should include comments, criticism, and the student's personal point of view about the article.

   Added on 2023-06-03

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Running head: PEER-REVIEW FORM
Peer-review Form
Name:
Academic Institution:
Date:
Peer-review Form_1
PEER-REVIEW FORM 2
Peer-review form 3: Draft version of essay
Aspects in essay Included
Y/N?
Comments: please provide clear comments
The paper has a
catchy opening
Y The hook of the draft is catchy. The first two
sentences which also serves as an introduction
grabs the attention of the reader as giving a desire
to continue reading the whole draft.
The introduction
provides enough
background
information
Y The introduction of the draft gives enough
background of the information by first introducing
the historical context of the topic. The thesis has
been briefly stated giving the reader a snapshot of
what is expected in the whole draft.
The introduction
contains a clear
indication of the main
problem.
Y The introduction contains a precise indication of
the major problem even though it creates some
confusion to the reader due to wide and general
information in regards to the issue being addressed.
Similarly, it does not emphasize on the excat
problem but again give a brief information
concerning problem that will be later discussed in
the draft.
It provides the solution which to the problem which
entails discussing the issue in general.
The central question
your peer tries to
Y The article provides the major question that the
peer tries to answer. The draft present a question on
Peer-review Form_2

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