Hi
I need writing my personal statement to apply in university. Need focus on my language proficiency. I did ielts 2 years ago but from march to july 2017 i had english class in newcastle university and then straight i start studying mba and accounting course there until now , from August 2017 and till now i had a customer service job in retail at factory x . I want to tell them in this personal statement i have quality to enter the uts university and my english is good enough to apply there. Please focuses on that cause i studying english in newcastle university and studying MBA and accounting course and also have customer service job i think my english is sufficient to apply there
Thank you