Horror and Loss: A Story of Coma, Grief, and Supernatural Redemption

This creative assignment presents a horror story where the protagonist wakes up from a five-year coma to discover his father's death, triggered by his initial collapse. Overwhelmed by grief and guilt, he embarks on a supernatural quest guided by a mysterious lady, navigating three perilous trials to potentially restore his father's life. These trials include a dark cabin with a doppelganger encounter, a treacherous stairway to heaven, and a return to the hospital, each testing his mental and physical endurance. Ultimately, he returns to his senses, finding his parents alive and well, realizing the importance of mental health and life satisfaction over material pursuits.

Essay

Topic: Scary and horror
I woke up just like every other day not knowing what would happen throughout the
hours I got out of bed and had this pain it was like no other pain I felt so bad I couldn’t
breathe and In that moment I fainted I woke up in the hospital surrounded by these figures I
couldn’t see properly in my mind I was thinking what’s happening to me what is wrong with
me I suddenly pass out again I wake up to what I thought was seconds but then turned into
years it’s been 5 years I was asleep in a coma I was sad and confused the doctors rushed in
and asked if I was okay and I Replied with what has happened they told me they I’ve been in
a coma for 5 years I asked simply what was wrong with me and they had no explanation other
then u wouldn’t wake up I got to go home and see my family for the first time in 5 years I
was nervous as I walked in the door in front of me was my mother who looked so different
and I asked where’s dad? She had this look and then started sobbing and said he’s gone I
stopped breathing it felt like I couldn’t breath I was shocked and furious I said what happened
to him and she said “as soon as you stopped breathing and went into a coma your dad
collapsed and hasn’t woken up”. Why does this have to happen to me what is wrong with me
and have we been cursed by something have we been cursed this whole family or just me and
my dad I stood there stunned I couldn’t speak I had no words I felt ashamed I sensed all the
guilt on me it was my own fault my mother was also in shock to see that I woke up and she
rushed over and hugged me I said to myself I need to leave and never come back so I ran
upstairs and gathered all my belongings and ran out of my house into the woods into the
darkest parts there I said this tree it was a strange looking tree something about it looked so
familiar but I couldn’t place it into my mind what it was so I went over to the tree and saw
that there was a key hole I had this key in my jacket that I gathered up from home I suddenly
took hold of the key and put it into the tree there was this magnificent light so bright so bright
I couldn’t see I suddenly trip and walked into this bright light and moments later I saw this
lady she had a big grin on her face and said in this startling tone of her voice finally You’re
here we have been waiting 5 years now come one I will show you how u can bring your dad
back home” I simply walk with her and she says “you have to go through 3 different
unknown places if you want your dad back you must not hurry now he doesn’t have much
time and near does you” so I look in-front of me and I see this sign saying cabin so I walk
along into this dark mysterious cabin I knocked on the door and the door opens but there was
no sign of anyone as I step into the cabin the door slams behind me I got shivers I was scared
there was this tall figure standing above me saying pick left or right so ran to the right and
there was this door another key hole in the door so I then started to look around the cabin to

find this key I look in the drawers and I see this key shape and the shape was different to the
one where I put in the tree I had this sense of danger behind this door but I opened the door
and it’s just this pitch blackness I see this person who looks like me like exactly me and then
I get this memory of my mother telling a story of when she was a kid she says when I was a
kid I had this friend who wasn’t real I made up but I felt that she was real she would always
talk. The kid who looked identical helped me to get out the first adventurous place i.e. the
cabin, I was so as this was the experience which I could never forget, dark rooms silent
rooms just had me goosebumps. For the second adventurous place I placed the second key
that I found in the cabin which was different from the first one. Again a bright light came
now this time my feet were frozen as someone have tied them with the chains and was
directed towards stairs of heaven. I barely could walk and after a moment I observed the
stairs started moving and all I see down was ditch. For the while I could figure out what was
happening and suddenly the stair stopped and string wind started blowing. I started loosing
hopes then again the kid that appeared me in first adventurous place i.e. the cabin shown up
again. This time I could walk properly, the kid carried my body with his hand and took me to
a bright light and was back to the origin place. A voice came for acknowledging me that I
need to pass the last adventurous place for getting my father back. By the time I realised I
was not able to move my hands. This was real bad feeling my eyes were full of tears I
couldn't express my feelings this was the worst nightmare for me. At the moment I thought
was going back home and take care of my mother but can't do so as my legs and hands was
frozen. Through the process it appeared, I was going back to the process of coma in which
only feeling I had was of pain and sufferings. The voice came back and I was redirected
towards the last adventurous place which appeared very common to me and it was the
hospital again!! This time my whole body was stuck and I can't move any part of my body
only my eyes and brain was working I barely could listen to noises or sound. By the passage
of time slowly I cam back to senses and saw my dad and mum standing with tears in their
eyes. Soon after hearing to feedback from doctors that I will be fine in some days after
getting some medications. I was so happy to hear this and was blessed to have my mother and
dad back and cant hold myself to live a happy life again with them.
This is one of the most scariest moment which I have faced in my life and gone
through. For an instance I thought it was all reel instead of real life but the hyper pain faced
by me reminded me of existence of the situation in real life. For the provided instance all the
life goals were left behind leaving its track behind and all my focus was to bring back the life
at its best sense as it was before. Throughout the incident, I was being acknowledged about

being in good mental health state is the best form of achievement an individual can carry.
Today's world running behind earning money will not achieve the true sense of joyful and
amazed life which can be experienced by individual with pure life satisfaction.