Regent College MBA Application: Personal Statement Analysis

This document is a personal statement written for an MBA application. It outlines the applicant's background, including their education at Regent College, and their family situation. The statement highlights the applicant's skills, such as leadership and communication, and their interest in finance. It describes the applicant's career goals, emphasizing their desire to enhance their skills and knowledge through the MBA program. The document also mentions the applicant's experience with various projects and internships, as well as their academic achievements. The applicant references two sources to support their claims and aspirations. The statement concludes by expressing their commitment to the course and the opportunities it will provide. The applicant's motivation to pursue an MBA is driven by a desire to improve their skills, expand their network, and advance their career in the field of finance.

STATEMENT

TASK
My name is ….... . I am …..... years old. There are ….... members present in the family including
me. I am from a small town named …..... . I am the only girl in my family. I have done my
schooling from …... . I have completed my bachelor studies in business management from
Regent College, London. I am applying for getting registration in MBA course. I have done
various projects, internships and work related to this course in my bachelor's course. I am a very
bright student from my initial days. I am a very hard-working and determined student. I possess
great leadership and technical skills which will help me in studying my masters course
effectively. I have a personal talent in negotiating things and I have also applied it in my earlier
studies. I have also won many awards and scholarships during my school and college days. It has
boosted my confidence to do whatever I want to do in my life. I can also do multi-tasking which
helps me in managing different tasks simultaneously. From starting I have interest in business
and management. It is my passion to work in this field and gain more knowledge as much as I
can. The assignments and studies I have done till now has enhanced my passion of becoming a
future leader. This can be possible only after I complete my masters degree(Li and Deng, 2019).
I have done various researches which has helped me in acquiring more useful knowledge about
this course. My analytical and risk management skills will also improve through this course. It
will also take out the best out of me. My parents have always supported me in deciding my
future. They give me the required peace and trust my decisions, it is the reason I do not feel any
pressure from them. They are my strongest support system in this world. I decided to pursue
MBA because it will help me in improving my communication and leadership skills. By studying
this course, I will get to know about the global market which is prevailing in the world. It will
help me in becoming a better time management person(Moulton and et. al., 2022). It will also
help me in expanding my network because it will give me an opportunity to meet new people. I
can also learn different things from them. This course will also help me in moving my career
ladder up at an accelerated pace. This will be very good for my future growth and development.
Pursuing this course will provide me various opportunities in future. I have a interest in finance

so I have decided to pursue my MBA in finance. This course will enhance my marketability as a
professional and will also increase the quality and quantity of job opportunities.
REFERENCES :
Books and Journals
Li, Y. and Deng, L., 2019. I am what I have written: A case study of identity construction in and
through personal statement writing. Journal of English for Academic Purposes, 37,
pp.70-87.
Moulton, M., and et. al., 2022. Making the Personal Statement “Truly Personal”:
Recommendations From a Qualitative Case Study of Internal Medicine Program and
Associate Program Directors. Journal of Graduate Medical Education, 14(2), pp.210-
217.
(Li and Deng, 2019) (Moulton and et. al., 2022)