Assignment 6: Revising Messages - Business Communication, Fall 2024

This assignment presents a student's revised versions of three business communication pieces. The first is a letter granting a claim for a defective frying pan, where the student revised the message to offer a replacement immediately and apologize for the inconvenience. The second is an email delivering bad news about cancelled employee vacations due to project changes; the student rephrased the subject line to be less negative and explained the situation before delivering the news to improve employee morale. Finally, the assignment includes a blog post persuading people to volunteer for a mentorship program, which the student improved by using clear headings, attention-grabbing sentences, and bullet points to enhance readability and skim-ability. The assignment demonstrates the student's ability to apply feedback and improve the clarity, tone, and effectiveness of business communications.

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Name: Rohit Sharma

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