University of Greenwich BUSI1633 Business Strategy Report

This document is a report for the BUSI1633 module, focusing on business strategy analysis. The report demonstrates a comprehensive understanding of the topic, incorporating strategic analysis frameworks and relevant literature. It includes an originality report indicating a 10% similarity index, with sources from various academic databases and student papers. The report is graded at 70, with detailed feedback provided across several categories: focus, synthesis, soundness, clarity, and mechanics. The instructor's comments highlight strengths and areas for improvement, offering specific suggestions for enhancing the report's structure, critical analysis, and use of literature. The feedback emphasizes the need for better organization, more in-depth analysis of peer-reviewed journals, and improvements in clarity and mechanics to achieve a higher grade.

BUSI1633_001130589
by Dang Duy
Submission date: 31-Mar-2021 06:53PM (UTC+0100)
Submission ID: 148489049
File name: BUSI1633_001130589_1303761_1433022643.pdf (191.18K)
Word count: 4866
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