Final Peer Review

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Final Peer Review
Southern New Hampshire University

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Final Peer Review
The essay draft by Mellisa (2019) writing style raises key fundamental issues with
regard to the contextual write-up and general rules and guidelines utilized in essay writing.
The task has attempted to cover contemporary issues underlying the issue of drug abuse more
especially heroine abuse which is a positive attribute. The task further has attempted to
answer key issues with regard to the contextual organization of the essay. The
epidemiological organization of the essay does not offer an introductory and insightful entry
into assessing and analyzing the author’s content. A good essay needs a clear focus with each
sentence to have clear topical sentences and develops a coherent flow to its logical
conclusion. The development context of the task does not offer a coherent flow of ideas and
instead, there is a mix up of the general introductory with the key context of the issue being
discussed.
The employed referencing style is poor and there is a need for a lot of effort to be
done on this aspect. The author does not follow any systematic type of referencing often used
in studies, further, the generated reference list illustrating poor writing skills and poor
mastery and knowledge of references style. The task does not offer in-depth critical analysis
by assessing various studies undertaken with regards to enough and in-depth literature
review. The literature cited are few illustrating poor research undertaken on the topic (edcon,
2019). Thus in this view, the author needs to improve on referencing issue and offer more in-
depth reading with regard to the research undertaken.