Title: Technical English/ Revision Techniques Question: 1. There are numerous ways in which the employees of the organization can be motivated and benefited as well, but one amongst all of them may attract more employees for the organization and that is monetary incentives 2. The operational requirements of the business organizations, have increased, which means that the need for hiring new employees have increased as well. But these organizations have to work hard to retain the employees as well. 3.While an employee is rewarded with incentives, they receives a recognition in the origination as well Provide each original sentence, and then the revised version you've come up with. In a paragraph, discuss which technique(s) you used to revise your sentence, and why you think the new version is superior. Do this for each of the 3 sentences you chose to revise. Include your sentences and analysis in a document, and submit it via this page to complete the assignment. Additional
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