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Revision Worksheet Assignment

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Added on  2020-05-28

Revision Worksheet Assignment

   Added on 2020-05-28

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Revision Worksheet: Essays 3 & 4What did you do in your revision that made your thesis stronger?In order to make my thesis stronger, I critically analyze black and white conflict from the perspective of Maya Angelou after Joe Louis has been won the title, ‘The Strongest Man of the World’. Did you use additional examples to develop your points in the body of the essay? List them.Yes, I use additional examples such as Michael Jordan, Tiger Woods, Jackie Robinson, Althea Gibson and Jack Johnson.List at two additional specific points made in the peer review. What did you do to addressthose issues in your revision?The two issues are listed below.1.The thinking of White people about racism2.The feelings of black community during the tension of boxing match and after the victoryof Joe Louis.In order to address first issue, I critically analyze the sarcastic thinking of white people. The people thought that they have especial right to win everything in the world because of their color of skin. In order to address the second mentioned issue, I critically evaluate the inferiority complex ofblack people. Besides of doing that, the feelings of superiority of black people has also been demonstrated in the essay. What specifically did you say in each of the responses you made to others to help them revise their work?First Response:
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