Business Communication: Financial Assistance Request for Icon Wedding

This document presents a sample business communication, specifically a letter requesting financial assistance. The author, an experienced wedding planner from "Icon Wedding," seeks a loan to expand their business. The letter outlines their experience, the required funding amount ($5859.6...Read More

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ABC (Your Name)
XYZ (Address, city, zip code)
XXXXXXX (Telephone and email address)
Date: 23rd March’2019
Recipient Name (Bank manager name)
XXZ (Recipient company address)
Recipient address
Dear recipient,
Our company “Icon wedding” maintains a cash credit account with your esteem bank from
last eight years. It has been a wonderful association for all these years. Furthermore, I would
like to submit my request for financial assistance for my new business as I am planning to
expand (Anderson, 2009).
As a young professional, having an experience of about 8 years working in wedding planning
services under the Icon international planning wedding company- which is the world’s largest
association for wedding planning organisation. I have been working with this organisation
during my non-office hours on the Management and technical handling aspects as a partner of
this particular firm. After gaining an 8-year experience under such a reputed firm, now I have
decided to open my own business in the similar field.
I think it is the right time for expansion of my own business as an entrepreneur in order to
grab more opportunities and can meet my set expectation and targets. Moreover, for all this
start up process their need of Finance. In order to meet expectation the initial amount that is
required is of around $5859.66. Therefore, I request you to kindly approve the financial
assistance application so that with time I can work over expansion of business. We assure that
all the repayments will be made as per the bank’s policy. Thank you for considering our
application. Please duly inform about the required documents to initiate the process so that
we can avail the loan at earliest (Cherry, 2011).
Sincerely,
ABC (Your Name)

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References
Anderson, D. D. (2009). The elementary persuasive letter: Two cases of situated competence,
strategy, and agency. Research in the Teaching of English, 270-314
Cherry, R. D. (2011). Politeness in written persuasion. Journal of pragmatics, 12(1), 63-81