Health and Social Care Report: Analyzing the Five Ways to Well-being

This report examines the 'Five Ways to Well-being' model within the context of health and social care. The student was tasked with revising a report based on tutor feedback, specifically focusing on essay format, concise writing, and the inclusion of examples. The revised report explores the five elemen...Read More

Health and Social Care

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What?
My tutor has told me to make certain changes in a report which is being prepared. Tutor have
conveyed that report need to be prepared on the basis of essay format so no any headings or sub
headings because essays are all created on paragraph basis which do not need any subheadings to
prove the statement. Tutor have also asked to change the first sentence as there are five ways to
well-being which contains five elements. Tutor have also provided some guidelines that
diagrams are been avoided in essays and all the information need to be written in paragraphs to
create an understanding about the concept.
In feedback, I was told to make the content concise and without any headings at all. Tutor
has also provided some guidelines to use some examples which governs the benefits of the five
approaches of well-being.
So What?
I have learned that essays are often written in paragraph formats which do not needs any
headings or subheadings in order to make the content attractive. I have also gained the
knowledge about the concise ways to present a report in an essay format which do not need any
diagrams or representative figures to make it look interesting. From this feedback, I have also
learned that examples need to be quoted in an essay in order to create clear understanding among
the minds of the readers.
No there is no any misunderstanding in understanding the feedbacks or guidelines which
are provided by the tutor but it also helps me to clear the concept of writing a essay report. The
guidelines help to improve my writing skills and these instructions help me to represent good
work.
The feedback provided by the tutor was nicely presented and the tutor has also used very
simple language to communicate the feedback which helps me to improve my writing skills.
Tutor have also described some points which are lacking in this essay and I do not find any
difficulty to interpret such feedback.

From the above guidelines I have learned to improve my writing skills that helps me to
understand the concept of writing an assay. It also made me clear that no diagrams, bullets and
lists are used in essay writings. I have also learned that Using the full name of the model is the
sign of the good essay writer.
Now what?
According to the guidelines and feedback provided by the tutor, these changes makes the
essay looks interesting that helps in explaining the module with the help of example. I have
removed such points which makes no sense to the essay or irrelevant information. This essay
will be improved by avoiding the use of bullets, lists and subheadings from this content. It started
with the improved introduction of the essay. Reworked sections of the essay are described
below:
I have strengthen the introduction by starting with the clear and concise definition on the main
topic then clearly mentioned the name of the approach and explained the further discovery of the
essay.
INTRODUCTION
Health and Social care can be defined as the process of providing the p[roper treatment to
the people who are physically or medically challenged (Aveyard, 2014). The essay is completely
based on the the model named as Five ways to well being and this model will help in creating a
complete understanding about the improved health and social care of the individual in order to
sustain for longer time. This essay will also provide the limitations of the five well being
approach.
The five ways to well-being contains five elements
The approach of Five ways to well-being contains Five element mainly aims at
improving the mental as well as physical health of the people by providing the high quality of
services (Gradinger and et.al., 2015). This helps in creating a fit and healthy society which
contributes actively towards all growth and development of the country. The approach will help
in provisioning five elements that helps in improving the social and health conditions of the
people.
The first phase of this approach named as Connect that help in connecting the individual
with the society so that this keeps the person feels free to express anything with others. This
stage will help in sharing the all the thoughts and feelings which are coming into the minds of the

individual. Secondly, this approach contains the another element which can be named as Be
Active helps in seeking out new learnings and experiences. Activeness and involvement in any
work helps in decreasing the stress, depression and anxiety. Take Notice will be the third
element which helps in paying more attention towards the world around (Brett and et.al., 2014).
This activity will help in improving the interactions and this supports the mental well being of
the person. Keep learning is the third element that helps in taking experiences from all those
situations or deals which are occurred. It may be negative or positive experiences which
strengthens the power to handle various situations in life. Sharing the happiness, joys, frustration
and illness makes a person feels free from the burden of allowing all such things to convert into
the mental illness. This can be explained through the sixth element that is Give.
Although, the Five ways of Well-being approach also faces some limitations or
challenges that impacts on the negative health of the individual. In spite of all the five elements
which are involved in improved health and social conditions of the people, lack of time is the
major disadvantage which leads to the poor health of the person. Huge pressure in life harms the
well being of an individual. Varied nature and differences in the attitude of the people also
minimises the effective interaction and communication which resulted in the jealousy, personal
grudges and clashes (Glasby, 2017). This impacts negatively on the mental health of the person.
Lack of Humanity and elderly support also leads to wrong guidance and thus this increases
the pressure which can be resulted in the mental disorder of an individual.
CONCLUSION
From the above essay it has been concluded that improved physical and mental health of
the people contributes towards the health and developed nation. The applications of the five
elements which are mentioned in the approach of five ways to well-being help in improving the
mental and physical illness of the people. This essay has also provided various challenges which
restricts the growth and development of the healthy individual in the society. The essay will help
in making a clear understanding about the benefits of applying well-being approach and various
limitations that governs the poor health.
According to the instructions and guidelines of the tutor I have improved the quality of
the essay by using the paragraphs for explaining the five ways of well-being and its limitations. I
have also created the essay interesting and attractive by highlighting the main points of this topic.

I have also addressed the main points that are missing the previous essay. I have also improved
the essay writing by using clear and concise statements that helps in understanding the concept
of this approach. I have also explained all the five elements which are lacking in the previous
content.
The essay was ended with the clear justification of using five ways of well-being
approach in the conclusion and I have also considered the marked changes which needs
improvement in this essay. I hope improved version will satisfy the requirements of the tutor and
reworked section will completely justify the feedback provided by the tutor.

REFERENCES
Aveyard, H., 2014. Doing a literature review in health and social care: A practical guide.
McGraw-Hill Education (UK).
Brett, J. and et.al., 2014. Mapping the impact of patient and public involvement on health and
social care research: a systematic review. Health Expectations. 17(5). pp.637-650.
Glasby, J., 2017. Understanding health and social care. Policy Press.
Gradinger, F. and et.al., 2015. Values associated with public involvement in health and social
care research: a narrative review. Health Expectations. 18(5). pp.661-675.
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