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Section/Concept Mark (100)Comment Title 3/4The selected title is relevant tothe work done, and it alsoreflects one of the requiredcomponents as described inthe requirement files.Opening paragraph 11/12Two of the criticalcomponents are highlighted inthe opening section of theparagraph. The purposes ofthe assignment have beenstated throughout thisparagraph. The primary fact isthat helps in retaining theinterest of the reader's.Argument 21/24The coherent argument wasmade, and it was strict as perthe question that whetherpeople over 40 years shouldspend three days in a week.The data collected throughsurvey helped in enhancingthe significance of argumentmade. Research 16/20Less factual errors areencountered, and sources areprovided for each of theassertions concerned. Thequalities of the sources arereliable to enhance the qualityof the task. The solutionprovided also reflected that theeffectual research wasconducted to get the desiredresult for the question.Presentation 16/20There are few of the areaswhere improvement can bemade regarding thepresentation of the task. Fewof the unclear parts need to berectified, and the linkagebetween the differentparagraphs needs to be moreappropriate. The grammaticalpoints and sentence formatting1 | Page
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